How might test-taker gender affect testscore meaning in a test of writing? Using corpus tools to extend a DIF study

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AAAL 2017, Portland, Oregon How might test-taker gender affect testscore meaning in a test of writing? Using corpus tools to extend a DIF study Zhi Li, Michelle Chen, & Jayan Banerjee Paragon Tes ng Enterprises, Inc. Vancouver, Canada

Gender and Language Use Direct Succinct Personal Instrumental Male Directives Refs to Quantity Elliptical Sentences "I" Reference Judgmental Adjectives Refs to Quantity Locatives Female Negations Uncertainty Verbs Questions Hedges Dependent Clauses Intensive Adverbs Mean Length Sentence Refs to Emotion Indirect Elaborate Contextual Affective from Mulac et al., (2006)

Study Context The Canadian English Language Proficiency Index Program (CELPIP) General Test Purposes and test structure The writing tasks 1. Writing an email (27 minutes) 2. Responding to survey questions (26 minutes)

Study Context 1. In a test, do male and female test takers write differently? 2. If male and female test takers write differently, does this difference result in a bias in the scores achieved?

Differential Item Functioning (DIF) An item is labeled with DIF when: Test takers with equal ability, but from different groups have an unequal probability of item success.

Differential Item Functioning (DIF) Adopted from Chen, Lam & Zumbo (2016); See also, Breland & Lee (2007)

Differential Item Functioning (DIF) Recap of a DIF study on writing prompts 81 writing prompts were tested 29 (35.8%) of the prompts were flagged Small magnitude of the Gender DIF effect: change of the R² < 0.02. Female Male Results from Chen et al., 2016

Interpretation of DIF Findings DIF vs. Bias Experts review items/prompts Test takers report cognitive process Analyzing test takers writing samples?

Research Questions To what extent do the gender groups differ in the linguistic features as elicited by a DIF writing task? How do the differences, if they exist, relate to test takers scores on the writing task?

The CELPIP Writing Construct Analytic scoring on four dimensions by multiple raters Coherence/Meaning: organization/clarity/depth of meaning Lexical Range: word choice/natural use of vocabulary/precision and accuracy Readability/Comprehensibility: word form/spelling, grammar, punctuation/format and paragraphing/transitions Task Fulfillment: relevance/completeness/tone/length Final reporting levels: 11 levels (M, 3-12) from CELPIP Study Guide: Reading and Writing

The Writing Prompt Selected CELPIP writing prompt Write a letter to a restaurant manager to 1) describe your food restrictions; 2) complain about the unavailability of food options for you; and 3) make suggestions to the restaurant.

The Corpus Table 1. Summary of the CELPIP corpus of written samples Gender Level 4 Level 5-8 Level 9-12 # of samples # of words Male 49 281 83 413 76855 Female 20 306 87 413 79619

http://www.kristopherkyle.com/tools.html Analytical Tools Tool (category) SEANCE 1.05 (sentiment/ social cognition) TAACO (cohesion features) Feature groups used # of features Relevance to the used scoring dimensions The General Inquirer (GI)-based indices 85 Task Fulfilment The NRC Word-Association Emotion 10 Lexicon (EmoLex)-based indices Adjacent lexical/semantic overlaps at 28 Coherence & sentence levels Meaning; Rhetorical connectives 23 Readability & Type-token ratios and repeated words 10 Comprehensibility TAASSC 1.4 (syntactic features) TAALES 1.0 (lexical features) Clause-based complexity indices 21 Readability & Noun phrase-based complexity indices 33 Comprehensibility Usage-based syntactic sophistication 23 indices Indices from the L2 Syntactic Complexity 4 Analyzer (L2SCA) Frequency of words and n-grams (BNC) 11 Lexical Range Range of words and n-grams (BNC) 10 MRC psychological properties of words 4

Data Preparation & Analysis Feature selection Construct-relevance criterion Distribution-based screening Pearson correlations Mann-Whitney U test (male vs. female) Multiple regressions Caveats

Results Sentiment/Social Cognition Table 3. Distinctive sentiment and social cognition features Sentiment/social cognition Features (dictionary or source) Mann-Whitney U Test (M vs. F) Correlation with writing proficiency level ES p r p Positive (EmoLex) -0.079.022-0.084.016 Negative (EmoLex) -0.070.045 0.133 <.001 Know (GI) -0.069.048 0.141 <.001 Causal (GI) -0.071.040-0.167 <.001 Self (GI) -0.080.022-0.330 <.001 Strong (GI) -0.071.042 0.110.002 Legal (GI) -0.086.013-0.088.011

Results Cohesion Features Table 4. Distinctive cohesion features Features Mann-Whitney U Test (M vs. F) Correlation with writing proficiency level ES p r p Overlap of noun lemmas (binary, 1 sentences) -0.097.005-0.086.013 Overlap of content word lemmas (binary, 2 sentences) -0.093.007 0.340 <.001 Overlap of preposition lemmas (binary, 2 sentences) -0.095.007 0.209 <.001 Number of logical connectives -0.079.022-0.242 <.001 Number of coordinating conjunctions -0.110.002-0.129 <.001 Number of connectives for reason and purpose -0.078.025-0.153 <.001 Number of causal connectives -0.082.018-0.255 <.001 Number of repeated content lemmas and pronouns -0.100.004-0.278 <.001 Ratio of pronouns to nouns -0.140 <.001-0.307 <.001 Number of subject personal pronouns -0.092.008-0.371 <.001

Results Syntactic Features Table 5. Distinctive syntactic features Features Mann-Whitney U Test (M vs. F) Correlation with writing proficiency level ES p r p Possessives per direct object -0.129 <.001 0.143 <.001 Possessives per object of preposition -0.096.006-0.080.022 Possessives per nominal -0.163 <.001 0.070.045 Dependents per nominal subject -0.094.007 0.199 <.001 Prepositions per object of preposition -0.086.014 0.287 <.001 Complex nominals per clause -0.129 <.001 0.118.001 Existential there per clause -0.092.008 0.117.001 Undefined dependents per clause -0.152 <.001-0.324 <.001 Subordinating conjunctions per clause -0.145 <.001 0.097.005 Faith scores (verb-construction, SD) -0.110.002 0.132 <.001 Faith scores (construction-verb, type) -0.099.005-0.126 <.001 Delta P scores (verb-construction, SD) -0.115.001 0.112.001

Results Lexical Features Table 6. Distinctive lexical features Features Mann-Whitney U Test (M vs. F) Correlation with writing proficiency level ES p r p Word frequency in BNC Written (content words) -0.070.044-0.073.037 Trigram proportion in BNC Written (all words) -0.070.045 0.216 <.001

Results Summary Table 7. Summary of the linguistic features studied for the gender groups Category (software) # of features studied # of distinctive features # of features w/ positive correlation Sentiment and social order features (SEANCE) 95 6 3 Cohesion features (TAACO) 61 10 2 Syntactic features (TAASSC) 81 12 9 Lexical features (TAALES) 25 2 1 Total 262 30 15 Adjusted R 2 =.698 (k all = 262); Adjusted R 2 =.460 (k disinctive = 30); Adjusted R 2 =.273 (k positive = 15)

Discussions Gender differences in the (timed) writing task Sentiment/social cognition; Cohesion features/syntactic features/lexical features Mulac et al., 2006; Leaper & Ayres, 2007 Implications Impact of gender differences on the equivalence of meanings of scores

Conclusions Overall, only a small number of linguistic features in the four aspects were found different between the gender groups with very small effect sizes. As a whole, these differences may have negligible impact on the comparability of writing scores.

How might test-taker gender affect test-score meaning in a test of writing? Using corpus tools to extend a DIF study Questions & Comments? research@paragontesting.ca

Selected References Argamon, S., Koppel, M., Fine, J., & Shimoni, A. R. (2003). Gender, genre, and writing style in formal written texts. Text - Interdisciplinary Journal for the Study of Discourse, 23(3). 321 346. Breland, H., & Lee, Y. (2007). Investigating uniform and non-uniform gender DIF in computer-based ESL writing assessment. Applied Measurement in Education, 20(4), 377 403 Chen, M. Y., Lam, W., & Zumbo, B. D. (2016). Testing for differential item functioning with no internal matching variable and continuous item ratings. Poster presented at the Language Testing Research Colloquium. Palermo, Italy. Crossley, S. A., Kyle, K., & McNamara, D. S. (2016). Sentiment Analysis and Social Cognition Engine (SEANCE): An automatic tool for sentiment, social cognition, and social-order analysis. Behavior Research Methods. doi:10.3758/s13428-016-0743-z Crossley, S. A., Kyle, K., & McNamara, D. S. (2015). The tool for the automatic analysis of text cohesion (TAACO): Automatic assessment of local, global, and text cohesion. Behavior Research Methods. doi:10.3758/s13428-015-0651-7 Francis, B., Robson, J., & Read, B. (2001). An analysis of undergraduate writing styles in the context of gender and achievement. Studies in Higher Education, 26(3), 313 326. Hartley, J., Pennebaker, J., & Fox, C. (2003). Using new technology to assess the academic writing styles of male and female pairs and individuals. Journal of Technical Writing, 33(3), 243 261. Herring, S. C., & Paolillo, J. C. (2006). Gender and genre variation in weblogs. Journal of Sociolinguistics, 10(4), 439 459. Jones, S., & Myhill, D. (2007). Discourses of difference? Examining gender differences in linguistic characteristics of writing. Canadian Journal of Education / Revue Canadienne de L éducation, 30(2), 456. doi:10.2307/20466646 Kubota, R. (2003). New approaches to gender, class, and race in second language writing. Journal of Second Language Writing, 12(1), 31 47. Kyle, K. (2016). Measuring syntactic development in L2 writing: Fine grained indices of syntactic complexity and usage-based indices of syntactic sophistication. Unpublished doctoral dissertation. Georgia State University. Kyle, K., & Crossley, S. A. (2015). Automatically assessing lexical sophistication: Indices, tools, findings, and application. TESOL Quarterly, 49(4), 757 786. Leaper, C., & Ayres, M. (2007). A meta-analytic review of gender variations in adults language use: Talkativeness, affiliative speech, and assertive speech. Personality and Social Psychology Review, 11(4), 328 363. Mulac, A., Bradac, J., & Gibbons, P. (2006). Empirical support for the gender-as-culture hypothesis. Human Communication Research, 27(1), 121 152. doi:10.1111/j.1468-2958.2001.tb00778.x Newman, M. L., Groom, C. J., Handelman, L. D., & Pennebaker, J. W. (2008). Gender differences in language use: An analysis of 14,000 text samples. Discourse Processes, 45(3), 211 236.

Example texts Level 4 (Sentiment/ Social Cognition) Female I am start diet current with my sister. Few days ago, my best friend birthday invited, so we went special restaurant near by my house. There are very clan and nice place and very favourite sea food restaurant. So we attend new special menu sea food kind ordered but there were no menu option that were suitable for me. So I made complain for restaurant manager, what kind of diet food do you have? he said just making fried seafood with salad. I am really disappointed kind of food, so I required seafood made grilled but he can not accepted. Really, feel bad with my friend and we just take diet drink. We just few minutes stay away, and I was told to manager as for the service at the restaurant. In your restaurant place very clan and very nice, but I think your if got more food kind then more came in customers and favourite restaurant. Male Dear, manager. Last week i visit your restaurant and i disappointed because i cannot eat same food i like because your restaurant serve a sea foods and also nuts i cannot eat it. Your restaurant is clean and good but i suggest you serve all different kinds of food example like vegetable fruit and most specially chicken for the children. Next time when i visit again in your restaurant i bring my friends and relatives and also i help you to improve your restaurant to going up soon. I invite also my all coworkers too visit your restaurant because food is very good test.

Example texts Level 7 (Sentiment/ Social Cognition) Female Dear Manager: I went to your restaurant last week. I have some food allergies, specifically I cannot eat seafood or nuts. If I eat this kind of food I have a severe allergic reaction, and I must go directly to the hospital. I was told by my doctor that if I don't get medical help soon after the event, I could die. Usually when I go out for dinner, I ask to the waitress if they have some alternative dishes that are nut free. Also I ask for beef or chicken. But when I looked at your menu I didn't find any option. Everything contain seafood or nuts. You might have your guests happy if you include more variety of ingredients. Also it is important to have a small kitchen separated to avoid food contamination. I am looking forward to visit your restaurant in the future, and have an option to enjoy your excellent kitchen. Thank you XXX Male To whom it may concern, I recently visited your restaurant, on 3/11/16, to celebrate my birthday with a group of friends. I had been excited to try it out as I had heard great things about the quality of food. Unfortunately, looking upon the menu I found that there were no options for someone with allergies to nuts and also seafood. Usually I would never have this problem in restaurants as there is always at least one dish that caters to my dietary restrictions. I was bitterly disappointed, and resigned to drinking from a bowl of water, like a dog. What a way to spend your 5th birthday. I would suggest that your company take the necessary measures to include multiple options on a new, redesigned menu. One that doesn't discriminate against people with weak immune systems. Maybe a nice variety of salads. Yours sincerely, XXX

Example texts Level 10 (Sentiment/ Social Cognition) Female To whom it may concern, I am writing to express my disappointment with a recent dining experience at Villa Italiano. As a long time customer of your restaurant, I feel the need to communicate my displeasure. As you may recall, I visited your restaurant on the evening of March 15th accompanied by my husband and two close friends. Earlier that day, I had called to enquire about the evening menu. I took pains to call ahead of time because I have recently learned that I am allergic to seafood and nuts, and I wanted to ensure that it would be possible for your staff to accommodate these restrictions. I was assured by your hostess that it would not be a problem and that there would be lots of options available for me. When we arrived for our 7:30 reservation, one glance at the menu was sufficient to show me that there was nothing I would be able to eat. We were forced to leave the restaurant. This problem could have been avoided if your hostess had been properly informed about the evening menu. I sincerely hope that you will improve your customer service in the future. XXX Male Good day Mr. Smith (New Manager of the Northern Peninsula Restaurant), I am writing to express my disappointment in the limited menu options at your restaurant and the apparent unwillingness to change. I have severe allergic reactions to seafood (mainly shellfish) and nuts ( such as almonds). I was shocked when I went to restaurant last week with my wife, only to realize that there were no food options on the menu which were safe for me to eat. All items either had a seafood or nut ingredient. I informed the waiter and he noted that the chef could do nothing at the time to prepare a meal suitable for me. I left rather disheartened. This week was a repeat of the same issue. I think you could solve this problem rather easily. For your menu options you could introduce meals with other meats, such as chicken, moose or venison. Another solution, might be to have variations of meals, excluding nuts for example. Lastly, I think that having a chef and staff that are flexible and can adjust meals to suit customers with dietary restrictions would prove useful. I hope you accept this advice. A disappointed customer, XXX

Example texts Level 4 (Cohesion) Female I am start diet current with my sister. Few days ago, my best friend birthday invited, so we went special restaurant near by my house. There are very clan and nice place and very favourite sea food restaurant. So we attend new special menu sea food kind ordered but there were no menu option that were suitable for me. So I made complain for restaurant manager, what kind of diet food do you have? he said just making fried seafood with salad. I am really disappointed kind of food, so I required seafood made grilled but he can not accepted. Really, feel bad with my friend and we just take diet drink. We just few minutes stay away, and I was told to manager as for the service at the restaurant. In your restaurant place very clan and very nice, but I think your if got more food kind then more came in customers and favourite restaurant. Male Dear, manager. Last week i visit your restaurant and i disappointed because i cannot eat same food i like because your restaurant serve a sea foods and also nuts i cannot eat it. Your restaurant is clean and good but i suggest you serve all different kinds of food example like vegetable fruit and most specially chicken for the children. Next time when i visit again in your restaurant i bring my friends and relatives and also i help you to improve your restaurant to going up soon. I invite also my all coworkers too visit your restaurant because food is very good test.

Example texts Level 7 (Cohesion) Female Dear Manager: I went to your restaurant last week. I have some food allergies, specifically I cannot eat seafood or nuts. If I eat this kind of food I have a severe allergic reaction, and I must go directly to the hospital. I was told by my doctor that if I don't get medical help soon after the event, I could die. Usually when I go out for dinner, I ask to the waitress if they have some alternative dishes that are nut free. Also I ask for beef or chicken. But when I looked at your menu I didn't find any option. Everything contain seafood or nuts. You might have your guests happy if you include more variety of ingredients. Also it is important to have a small kitchen separated to avoid food contamination. I am looking forward to visit your restaurant in the future, and have an option to enjoy your excellent kitchen. Thank you XXX Male To whom it may concern, I recently visited your restaurant, on 3/11/16, to celebrate my birthday with a group of friends. I had been excited to try it out as I had heard great things about the quality of food. Unfortunately, looking upon the menu I found that there were no options for someone with allergies to nuts and also seafood. Usually I would never have this problem in restaurants as there is always at least one dish that caters to my dietary restrictions. I was bitterly disappointed, and resigned to drinking from a bowl of water, like a dog. What a way to spend your 5th birthday. I would suggest that your company take the necessary measures to include multiple options on a new, redesigned menu. One that doesn't discriminate against people with weak immune systems. Maybe a nice variety of salads. Yours sincerely, XXX

Example texts Level 10 (Cohesion) Female To whom it may concern, I am writing to express my disappointment with a recent dining experience at Villa Italiano. As a long time customer of your restaurant, I feel the need to communicate my displeasure. As you may recall, I visited your restaurant on the evening of March 15th accompanied by my husband and two close friends. Earlier that day, I had called to enquire about the evening menu. I took pains to call ahead of time because I have recently learned that I am allergic to seafood and nuts, and I wanted to ensure that it would be possible for your staff to accommodate these restrictions. I was assured by your hostess that it would not be a problem and that there would be lots of options available for me. When we arrived for our 7:30 reservation, one glance at the menu was sufficient to show me that there was nothing I would be able to eat. We were forced to leave the restaurant. This problem could have been avoided if your hostess had been properly informed about the evening menu. I sincerely hope that you will improve your customer service in the future. XXX Male Good day Mr. Smith (New Manager of the Northern Peninsula Restaurant), I am writing to express my disappointment in the limited menu options at your restaurant and the apparent unwillingness to change. I have severe allergic reactions to seafood (mainly shellfish) and nuts ( such as almonds). I was shocked when I went to restaurant last week with my wife, only to realize that there were no food options on the menu which were safe for me to eat. All items either had a seafood or nut ingredient. I informed the waiter and he noted that the chef could do nothing at the time to prepare a meal suitable for me. I left rather disheartened. This week was a repeat of the same issue. I think you could solve this problem rather easily. For your menu options you could introduce meals with other meats, such as chicken, moose or venison. Another solution, might be to have variations of meals, excluding nuts for example. Lastly, I think that having a chef and staff that are flexible and can adjust meals to suit customers with dietary restrictions would prove useful. I hope you accept this advice. A disappointed customer, XXX

Example texts Level 4 (Syntactic features) Female I am start diet current with my sister. Few days ago, my best friend birthday invited, so we went special restaurant near by my house. There are very clan and nice place and very favourite sea food restaurant. So we attend new special menu sea food kind ordered but there were no menu option that were suitable for me. So I made complain for restaurant manager, what kind of diet food do you have? he said just making fried seafood with salad. I am really disappointed kind of food, so I required seafood made grilled but he can not accepted. Really, feel bad with my friend and we just take diet drink. We just few minutes stay away, and I was told to manager as for the service at the restaurant. In your restaurant place very clan and very nice, but I think your if got more food kind then more came in customers and favourite restaurant. Male Dear, manager. Last week i visit your restaurant and i disappointed because i cannot eat same food i like because your restaurant serve a sea foods and also nuts i cannot eat it. Your restaurant is clean and good but i suggest you serve all different kinds of food example like vegetable fruit and most specially chicken for the children. Next time when i visit again in your restaurant i bring my friends and relatives and also i help you to improve your restaurant to going up soon. I invite also my all coworkers too visit your restaurant because food is very good test.

Example texts Level 7 (Syntactic features) Female Dear Manager: I went to your restaurant last week. I have some food allergies, specifically I cannot eat seafood or nuts. If I eat this kind of food I have a severe allergic reaction, and I must go directly to the hospital. I was told by my doctor that if I don't get medical help soon after the event, I could die. Usually when I go out for dinner, I ask to the waitress if they have some alternative dishes that are nut free. Also I ask for beef or chicken. But when I looked at your menu I didn't find any option. Everything contain seafood or nuts. You might have your guests happy if you include more variety of ingredients. Also it is important to have a small kitchen separated to avoid food contamination. I am looking forward to visit your restaurant in the future, and have an option to enjoy your excellent kitchen. Thank you XXX Male To whom it may concern, I recently visited your restaurant, on 3/11/16, to celebrate my birthday with a group of friends. I had been excited to try it out as I had heard great things about the quality of food. Unfortunately, looking upon the menu I found that there were no options for someone with allergies to nuts and also seafood. Usually I would never have this problem in restaurants as there is always at least one dish that caters to my dietary restrictions. I was bitterly disappointed, and resigned to drinking from a bowl of water, like a dog. What a way to spend your 5th birthday. I would suggest that your company take the necessary measures to include multiple options on a new, redesigned menu. One that doesn't discriminate against people with weak immune systems. Maybe a nice variety of salads. Yours sincerely, XXX

Example texts Level 10 (Syntactic features) Female To whom it may concern, I am writing to express my disappointment with a recent dining experience at Villa Italiano. As a long time customer of your restaurant, I feel the need to communicate my displeasure. As you may recall, I visited your restaurant on the evening of March 15th accompanied by my husband and two close friends. Earlier that day, I had called to enquire about the evening menu. I took pains to call ahead of time because I have recently learned that I am allergic to seafood and nuts, and I wanted to ensure that it would be possible for your staff to accommodate these restrictions. I was assured by your hostess that it would not be a problem and that there would be lots of options available for me. When we arrived for our 7:30 reservation, one glance at the menu was sufficient to show me that there was nothing I would be able to eat. We were forced to leave the restaurant. This problem could have been avoided if your hostess had been properly informed about the evening menu. I sincerely hope that you will improve your customer service in the future. XXX Male Good day Mr. Smith (New Manager of the Northern Peninsula Restaurant), I am writing to express my disappointment in the limited menu options at your restaurant and the apparent unwillingness to change. I have severe allergic reactions to seafood (mainly shellfish) and nuts ( such as almonds). I was shocked when I went to restaurant last week with my wife, only to realize that there were no food options on the menu which were safe for me to eat. All items either had a seafood or nut ingredient. I informed the waiter and he noted that the chef could do nothing at the time to prepare a meal suitable for me. I left rather disheartened. This week was a repeat of the same issue. I think you could solve this problem rather easily. For your menu options you could introduce meals with other meats, such as chicken, moose or venison. Another solution, might be to have variations of meals, excluding nuts for example. Lastly, I think that having a chef and staff that are flexible and can adjust meals to suit customers with dietary restrictions would prove useful. I hope you accept this advice. A disappointed customer, XXX